- The Frantic Doldrum -

It no longer seems comforting

Such a sickly way of reasoning

Never knowing what to do

Always knowing who to be

Be strong and intellegent beyond the skin

Be cowardly and stupid within the bones

Wanting to be so close

Yet still pushing so far away

Carry everyone

Let no one hold me

But I want it

Never let them see

Never let them see

What will become if I reveal what I feel

I'm afraid to admit

Afraid to see the reaction

Always waiting

Never speaking

Will these things die with me

Of that I hope not

I beg for a chance to be

To see

To let it be known

Not through enigmas hard to see

Only through speaking headfirst

Not thinking

Not second guessing

Why do I always re-route my words

To only hold general interest

And hide the true admiration

I hope I can fix this thing

This thing that inhibits me

This thing that's wrong with me

This thing that's killing me

Please knock some sense into me







©Mad-Bread

Not bad. I think you have a talent. Moor talented then me anyway

Thank you.

ya i like it, the words sound very honest and from the heart

kudos

Nice, NQ...

Speaking as an English teacher.... you should continue to pursue this talent! See where it takes you! Also... your title was quite interesting; couldn't help but clicking to read the thread when I saw it. Well done!

A4S

Thank you both very much. ^^

Isn't it a pain how you can see a problem so cloesly and yet not be able to just not be that way? What you say is so true of many people I think. Even if you feel like it's just you.