a poem a wrote, it gives me hope

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a poem a wrote, it gives me hope

Everynight I can I see
the stars in the sky
and sometimes I dare to dream
that one day I'll reach that high.

Sometimes I think I'm close
and I'll soon be able to say
in the maze of dreams and hopes
I've finally found my way.

In my heart I'll know
I've found those special stars
that will always glow and glow
till they outshine my pasts scars.

Each special star my faith
that God looks over us in life
and with an honest person he will place
Some special stars; some friends for life.

03-05-2008 12:42 AM

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nice!...... i like this part the most:

Each special star my faith
that God looks over us in life
and with an honest person he will place
Some special stars; some friends for life.

03-05-2008 01:07 AM

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I like it as well ^^ It looks like you put a lot of work into it...I wish I could sound half as smart, but I'm bad with writing.

04-22-2008 05:52 PM

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Hey, that's just beautiful. I share your sentiment. I guess I'm a dreamer too.

10-21-2008 06:09 AM

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