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my song..

Savior in the fire

Never wanted an angel
Always searching for a devil
Deadly fire, painful passion
I´m trapped in your magic
Fear won´t stop me
You´ll hurt me I know but
Pleasure will be unthinkable
I´m yours in this enchanted night
After tonight I´ll crave for you
But you won´t return

I hear fire calling me
She´s singing her sweet symphony
As I walk in I tremble from fear
Blinding light, unbearable heat
Smoke is burning my eyes
It´s getting harder to breathe
Just when I think
I´ll vanish in flames
You pull me close
I feel your breath on my lips
Never did I feel so sheltered
But somehow by saving me
You condemned me and one day
There will be a price to pay

As I drift into dreams
I hear you walking away
I fall in a cold sea
My heart skips a beat
Suddenly I´m surrounded by the ice
Fire seems so far away
Moment before I close my eyes
I realize
For a second
I was alive


The trick is to keep breathing.

With tired eyes, tired minds, tired souls, we slept.

I want you to take away the hope, because that´s the only thing that´s killing me.
09-12-2008 09:04 AM
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RE: my song..

Hi rescueme and let me welcome you here since am replying to this thread Smile I did read your introduction thread BTW Smile

I like the song. You have a talent. I specially like how you ended it.

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Moment before I close my eyes
I realize
For a second
I was alive

09-12-2008 06:34 PM
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