I am young, I am lonely
You think I am free?
You think I am sultry
As thats what you see.

I go with a frown,
And my shoulders are down,
As they carry the world,
And it's weight lies with me.

Only thirteen,
I should be so keen,
To go and make friends,
I shouldn't refrain.

I will not go,
Won't let the pain show.
Don't want to be attacked
Punched again and again.

It's not for attention,
Away with relention,
This is true,
I am alone.

Don't lock me away,
Because that's what you say,
You will try to do,
If I carry on this road.

Get me some aid,
Don't be afraid,
Help me now
Save a life.

Hi there That was a cool poem we seem to be having a lot of poets to day

I well move this to the express your self forum as well. You well be able to post in there now as well

Welcome here

Please give ur comments on this poem. Thank you.
Helena XxX

I think it an awesome poem, more than anything I could come up that for sure. I love how you use big word, like retention and stuff, was really cool. I give you an A for your poem, and another A for effort. I really like the poem, you sound like a sweet person. Hope you continue to post on this site.


Chris