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[/color]The Call of Despair
When the nights last forever And there is no sun Time stands still Nothing ever gets done The future looks bleak Life is a shade of gray No reason to go on Can't take another day Life seems empty and barren Nothing to bring any joy Don't want the company of another Just sit there quiet and coy Futility shouts from afar Wish it was all over now Don't want to fight anymore And can't remember how When you can't go on living And death becomes an obsession You know you've met the enemy And its name is depression |
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| 04-15-2007 12:46 PM | |
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tashar_boo Junior Member   Posts: 39 Group: Registered Joined: Mar 2007 Status: Offline Reputation
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[/color]The Call of Despair
When the nights last forever And there is no sun Time stands still Nothing ever gets done The future looks bleak Life is a shade of gray No reason to go on Can't take another day Life seems empty and barren Nothing to bring any joy Don't want the company of another Just sit there quiet and coy Futility shouts from afar Wish it was all over now Don't want to fight anymore And can't remember how When you can't go on living And death becomes an obsession You know you've met the enemy And its name is depression dat good.. at least someone here also writes poems
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| 04-24-2007 02:04 PM | |
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angeLLblueshadow Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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really full of meaning; just beautiful...we have some reall talents here; it seems like loneliness is the best inspiration! really good poem, just loved it! |
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| 05-25-2007 03:51 AM | |
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Lonelyandloveless Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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A broken heart
A broken hearts like poison it slowly makes u weak a broken hearts like depression u wanna hide away and weep a broken hearts like ilness it makes u sick and tired a broken hearts like bein bullied it makes u hurt inside a broken hearts like fear it makes u want to run a broken hearts like nighttime as u hav lost ur sun a broken hearts like winter bitter as snow and frost id rather never luv at all than have fallen in luv and lost
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| 06-23-2007 08:28 PM | |
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lonelygirl Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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Lonely, that is a beautiful poem. Very pretty. Deep thoughts for a person just 12 years old! But are you really loveless? Doesn't your family love you? Your friends? Your teachers? 12 is young for romantic love. YOu should have crushes on boys at school and whisper about it with your friends, not seek a real boyfriend. That would lead to a possibly sexual relationship and being 12, that's a VERY bad idea. People are not sexually mature and emotionally mature enough to have a sexual relationship until much older. |
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| 06-24-2007 01:24 PM | |
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Lonelyandloveless Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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Lonely, that is a beautiful poem. Very pretty. Deep thoughts for a person just 12 years old! But are you really loveless? Doesn't your family love you? Your friends? Your teachers? 12 is young for romantic love. YOu should have crushes on boys at school and whisper about it with your friends, not seek a real boyfriend. That would lead to a possibly sexual relationship and being 12, that's a VERY bad idea. People are not sexually mature and emotionally mature enough to have a sexual relationship until much older. i know it sounds bad but i am just so lonely
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| 06-30-2007 06:34 AM | |
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Lonelyandloveless Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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What Is It
Youre the best thing thats ever happened to me youre the worst thing on this earth youre sometimes riddled with sadness but usually riddled with mirth everybody wants you but they usually pretend that they dont want or need you but they find you in the end youre the most desired thing on the planet but something that pessimists hate everybody needs you youre power, you know, is great you remind me of the night the moon, the stars above everyone knows your name my friends know your name i know your name its love |
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| 07-01-2007 01:58 AM | |
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Lonelyandloveless Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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the shadow men
the dark is like a creature down below down in the pit fingering old bones the terrible creatures down in the pit there they lay there they sit i go with my question into the pit of snow they give me my answer they laugh as i go i waste away here i sit they told me where we go when we're dead down into the pit |
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| 07-01-2007 02:03 AM | |
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BrokenDreams Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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Beautiful poems Lonelyandloveless! Guest, yours was good as well!^^ |
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| 07-05-2007 02:33 AM | |
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