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BrokenDreams Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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I just found a poem I wrote a couple of months ago, and I thought I could share it with you guys. Sorry it is not as good as what other members create but its something.
Unloved
I feel these tears that I cry, Streaming down, from eye to eye My life has changed since you've been gone Everything just seems to go wrong.
I never wanted this to happen Life just never goes my way My heart shattered into a million pieces And all my dreams just faded away
Its been awhile since you've been gone, But my hearts been broken all along. I'm not the girl I want to be And who I am is hard to see.
I miss you so terribly. How could this have happened to me? Why must life be so mean? Is happiness something I will never see?
I just wish someone could understand. Someone to touch my heart, and to hold my hand. Someone to show me what love means. Because love is something I have never seen.
I wipe these tears as the stream down my face I start to wonder as I cry myself to sleep, why everyone deserves love and happiness but me.
Well, feel free to comment on it. I'm sorry if there are grammar/ spelling mistakes... |
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| 05-03-2007 05:47 AM | |
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angeLLblueshadow Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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BEAUTIFUL!!!! it was wonderful, really at first i didn't knew what to expect from it, but after the third line i was compleatlly into it, it was very good, you should write some more; did you ever think about putting some music to this poem? i think it would be great! i can't wait to read your new poem! |
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| 05-25-2007 03:45 AM | |
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BrokenDreams Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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Yay! Someone liked it! ^^ I just wrote the poem one night when I couldn't sleep. I never thought of adding music or anything like that, but it could work. Thanks for the ideas.  |
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| 05-28-2007 06:26 AM | |
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Leedslad Unregistered MyMood: None Points:
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[/u][/b]Hi, I am new to this site. I thought I would begin with a poem I wrote about my childhood....
[b][u]Abandonment
Would a mother leave her child, in the world on their own? Would a mother give her child, away to another home? Would a mother refuse to love and turn her back forever Would a mother see her baby,never ever ever You may think this is strange, you may wonder why But thats what happened to a baby boy who turned into this guy. Its not abandonment, or so people think But life without a mother? Just stop and think! A loveless life, a loveless home, a loveless love Thats what made life so hard, thats what made me tough A pretence,charade, an act upon a stage Not really a mother, a woman in masquerade "I love you" the empty words, i heard once in a while So why when you do say that,do you never smile? Ok so I had material things, a home and new clothes But for love of a mother I would swap all those Although I pretend, the effect has cut deep I dont think ill ever love, I think its been layed to sleep. So abandonment it may not be, but loss it sure is I cant ever remember, the warmth of a mothers kiss The comfort of her arms wrapped around me tight The soft whisper in my ear, telling me its alright So I wander aimlessly, confused and alone Will I ever meet, the mother of my own? |
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| 05-28-2007 11:59 PM | |
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