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Naleena

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Where the faeries live, Silly.
Silent night
looooonely night
Nothings calm
nothings right

The demons move
within the deep
they summon me now
inside my sleep

with thousands of fingers
and hollowed out eyes
they pierce my soul
they feast on cries

Please take my hand
while I bleed
I need a friend
to witness me

You have no words
You have no right
please don't go
stay the night

I am so weak
I am so strong
The warrior lamb
She carries on

Oh,tell me now
Oh, tell me true
will you watch over me
till this night is through

Till the pain subsides
and the demons flee
till the sun comes again
and I am free





 
Warrior lamb,
Give me your hand.
Your heart is sweet
But incomplete.
Lonely living is tearing your heart,
Sadness governing all that you are.
Demons frighten at night,
Waken your spirit and fly!
 
:O

such poetry I am in awe
my shear attempts I fall
in comaparsion
nothing sounds as sweet
without a sick beat
your words a an epic feat
to the cries of defeat
no haste nor retreat
until the day we meet
no words shall sound as sweet
until the stanzas do repeat

ps *hugs*
 
Beautiful, I shall return once I've written some more.. I'm in the mood to write! EDIT: here we go, this is a direct song re-write, more like a minor alteration of this song: ( listen to it first )


A warm afternoon the middle of June
You didn't know that I'd fallen for you
The long nights I stayed up, excuses I made up
and I knew that you didn't feel this way too

There's nothing as sweet as your voice is to me
Its better than Summer and Spring
The words that you speak bring such comfort to me,
We'll never be together and I'm just so lonely

As I recall it was in the hall where I found you
A year has gone past
The long days without you, spent thinking about you
And all of the memories, they came flooding back


There's nothing as sweet as your voice is to me
Its better than Summer and Spring
The words that you speak bring such comfort to me,
We'll always be apart and I'm lonely

I just want to let you go
So I just thought that I'd let you know

There's nothing as sweet as your voice is to me
Its better than Summer and Spring
The words that you speak bring such comfort to me,
when we're miles apart and I'm lonely
 

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