D Drama Guest Mar 18, 2011 #1 I am sure i will regret posting this later.. but for now I hav eneough courage *removed by request*
X xuchu5 Member Joined Nov 27, 2010 Messages 16 Reaction score 0 Mar 19, 2011 #2 wow, great story (it is a story right). It's very descriptive and haunting. I anxiously await part 2. Well done Liley, do you write as a hobby?
wow, great story (it is a story right). It's very descriptive and haunting. I anxiously await part 2. Well done Liley, do you write as a hobby?
D Drama Guest Mar 19, 2011 #3 Thanks for you comment .. Um im not sure what it is yet, actually lol. Yeah writing is a hobby and i hope that i wont give up on it Thanks again
Thanks for you comment .. Um im not sure what it is yet, actually lol. Yeah writing is a hobby and i hope that i wont give up on it Thanks again
R RyanEhf Guest Mar 21, 2011 #4 It's good. I think it has good dynamics, or like the way the story moves along, as well as good imagery and forshadowing. You have talent
It's good. I think it has good dynamics, or like the way the story moves along, as well as good imagery and forshadowing. You have talent
UGLYDUCKLING Well-known member Joined Apr 2, 2011 Messages 68 Reaction score 0 Location Hogwarts or maybe Downton Abbey ? Apr 5, 2011 #6 WOW! I really loved the figure of speech you used there.
Doubt The Rabbit Well-known member Joined Oct 11, 2010 Messages 2,208 Reaction score 6 Apr 5, 2011 #8 Liiiiiiiiiiiley (goo) LOVE! (((hug)))
kamya Well-known member Joined Mar 2, 2011 Messages 3,178 Reaction score 12 Location Central Illinois Apr 5, 2011 #9 Its so random. I like it.
D Drama Guest Apr 6, 2011 #10 Rabiiiiiiiit (GOO) <3 <3 ty thanks kamya but what do you mean by random,