Oblivion Part 1

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I am sure i will regret posting this later.. but for now I hav eneough courage :D

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wow, great story (it is a story right). It's very descriptive and haunting. I anxiously await part 2.
Well done Liley, do you write as a hobby?
 
Thanks for you comment :).. Um im not sure what it is yet, actually lol.
Yeah writing is a hobby and i hope that i wont give up on it :p
Thanks again :)
 
It's good. I think it has good dynamics, or like the way the story moves along, as well as good imagery and forshadowing. You have talent :)
 

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