Hi! So i wrote a story about love.. a really really silly short one, What i am asking for you is to give me feedback, what did you like about it if any? what did you hate about? any grammar issues? And PLEASE be honest i can take it i promise, i am doing this to improve my writing and this is the only place i have felt comfortably to publish something. Here we go. (Embarrassing!) It's called Love.
Imagine love. Love, a four letter word that means the world. Everything is possible when you are in love, Everything. That is how it is.
Having him kissing you all over your body whiles you're craving for more, more kisses, more touches – more more oh god i want more. The way he holds you how he wraps his arm around you stroking your hair. He whispers how ”everything is going to be okay” into your ears and the worst part is you believe him. Its true it will be okay cause its love and love cannot harm it cannot scare, love is beautiful, bringer of peace.
Promises do not last, nothing lasts. All those words were lies every promise he made – He lied to me! But what about love? I do not understand - i thought love was everything i thought it saved us instead it cuts our hearts out, jump on it for a little while – maybe let the dog play with it.
But i really would not know. No one has ever kissed me, ever held me, ever lied to me. I am starving, craving. Love.
Imagine love. Love, a four letter word that means the world. Everything is possible when you are in love, Everything. That is how it is.
Having him kissing you all over your body whiles you're craving for more, more kisses, more touches – more more oh god i want more. The way he holds you how he wraps his arm around you stroking your hair. He whispers how ”everything is going to be okay” into your ears and the worst part is you believe him. Its true it will be okay cause its love and love cannot harm it cannot scare, love is beautiful, bringer of peace.
Promises do not last, nothing lasts. All those words were lies every promise he made – He lied to me! But what about love? I do not understand - i thought love was everything i thought it saved us instead it cuts our hearts out, jump on it for a little while – maybe let the dog play with it.
But i really would not know. No one has ever kissed me, ever held me, ever lied to me. I am starving, craving. Love.