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This will probably be my last message here on this site since I've asked for my account to be deleted. I just don't want to come here anymore, it doesn't help me. Anyway, I wrote a poem about a month ago I wanted to share. Just note that I was in a really bad place at the time, but it is how I genuinely felt at the time I wrote it so it is my true feelings from that time.

I take a look back and I see where it went wrong.
But maybe this was simply my destiny all along.
I stop and I look at what I've done with my life.
Yet all that I see is nothing but pain and strife.
Will things ever work, will they ever be right?
But all I see is darkness, what's hidden is the light.
I see what I've done wrong, and I simply just cry.
I've messed up so badly, I wonder why I still try.

I keep waiting for someone, but where could they be?
So it seems that there really is no one for me.
I guess I'm just cursed to live life on my own.
I'll simply die broken, miserable, and alone.
Ask me when I'll find someone, and the answer is never.
Ask me how long I'll be alone, the answer is forever.
I guess it doesn't matter since I have nothing to give.
And this loneliness is the reason I don't want to live.

I keep waiting on that light to shine its way through.
But it never seems to come, so what can I do?
If I'm cursed to die alone, then please let this end.
There are people around me, but I need more than a friend.
I look at everything wrong, and all I can do is sigh.
I really wish I could stay strong, but I just want to die.
 
wow that's a really good poem haywud, I'm impressed. I'm sorry to hear that your leaving. I really like your avatar btw I'm a pretty big H.I.M. fan as well.
Good luck wherever you from here :)
 
Can I ask you something ? You really made this poem by yourself ?
This is such a great poem.but seems like you're very sad.all of lines of your poem telling your situation.
Don't give up like this ,stay strong ,everything will be alright.
 
Two lover's heart's in twine. Face to face 
Lips to lips. 
Such  tender kisses..
Yes I remember your lips your face and your heart.
It's a shame we will always be apart.. for I will never love another. For there is no other. That can take your place..
I'm my heart.....💔
 
When will my life come to an end.
The anger within me has filled my heart with hatred.
God give me the strength
To take my pill's and end the suffering that I feel.
So alone am i without you by my side.
Now you all know what is in my mind.
 
Are these poems for Haywud? If so, I'll make sure to pass them on to him when I speak to him next.
 
nibbysaurus said:
Are these poems for Haywud? If so, I'll make sure to pass them on to him when I speak to him next.

No there for everyone i just put them in here .. is that ok....
 

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