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A Cemetery called A Lonely Life
#1
Come here to die
Bury me 
on this thread
this subforum
I will write an epigraph later
Its a nice quiet place
Nice view if you use your imagination
Other lonely zealots
Screwed up by society I guess
But really we allowed
Ourselves become a mess
We don't like ownership of our sultry sins
we came here
to shed eternal tears
for our fragile but huge
egos
We don't rate
out there
in the border collie eats border collie world
at least here
no one 
can hurt us
we can find peace
in our self-pity
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#2
Beautiful, sad and challenging poem ….

Congratulations, humourless !

If I am allowed, I would like to add this :
 
I am an enthusiastic and positive person.
I have come here not to bewail, but to encourage those who seem to need support and understanding.
Being optimistic has more to do with reflection and practice.
I believe in working to achieve a goal.
Best wishes !
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#3
(06-14-2019, 07:04 PM)sunlight_hope Wrote: Beautiful, sad and challenging poem ….

Congratulations, humourless !

If I am allowed, I would like to add this :
 
I am an enthusiastic and positive person.
I have come here not to bewail, but to encourage those who seem to need support and understanding.
Being optimistic has more to do with reflection and practice.
I believe in working to achieve a goal.
Best wishes !
your positivity sounds genuine to me sunlight. maybe I need to change my tune eh
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#4
Yes! It's not a grave (although you chose to be a ghost, a soul, a vault)

"...But really we allowed
Ourselves become a mess..."

Yes! You were right at that, above.
I'll be all I want to be!
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