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[/color]The Call of Despair

When the nights last forever
And there is no sun
Time stands still
Nothing ever gets done
The future looks bleak
Life is a shade of gray
No reason to go on
Can't take another day
Life seems empty and barren
Nothing to bring any joy
Don't want the company of another
Just sit there quiet and coy
Futility shouts from afar
Wish it was all over now
Don't want to fight anymore
And can't remember how
When you can't go on living
And death becomes an obsession
You know you've met the enemy
And its name is depression
 
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[/color]The Call of Despair

When the nights last forever
And there is no sun
Time stands still
Nothing ever gets done
The future looks bleak
Life is a shade of gray
No reason to go on
Can't take another day
Life seems empty and barren
Nothing to bring any joy
Don't want the company of another
Just sit there quiet and coy
Futility shouts from afar
Wish it was all over now
Don't want to fight anymore
And can't remember how
When you can't go on living
And death becomes an obsession
You know you've met the enemy
And its name is depression

dat good.. at least someone here also writes poems
 
really full of meaning; just beautiful...we have some reall talents here; it seems like loneliness is the best inspiration! really good poem, just loved it!
 
A broken heart

A broken hearts like poison
it slowly makes u weak
a broken hearts like depression
u wanna hide away and weep
a broken hearts like ilness
it makes u sick and tired
a broken hearts like bein bullied
it makes u hurt inside
a broken hearts like fear
it makes u want to run
a broken hearts like nighttime
as u hav lost ur sun
a broken hearts like winter
bitter as snow and frost
id rather never luv at all
than have fallen in luv and lost

By Lonelyandloveless
 
Lonely, that is a beautiful poem. Very pretty. Deep thoughts for a person just 12 years old! But are you really loveless? Doesn't your family love you? Your friends? Your teachers? 12 is young for romantic love. YOu should have crushes on boys at school and whisper about it with your friends, not seek a real boyfriend. That would lead to a possibly sexual relationship and being 12, that's a VERY bad idea. People are not sexually mature and emotionally mature enough to have a sexual relationship until much older.
 
lonelygirl said:
Lonely, that is a beautiful poem. Very pretty. Deep thoughts for a person just 12 years old! But are you really loveless? Doesn't your family love you? Your friends? Your teachers? 12 is young for romantic love. YOu should have crushes on boys at school and whisper about it with your friends, not seek a real boyfriend. That would lead to a possibly sexual relationship and being 12, that's a VERY bad idea. People are not sexually mature and emotionally mature enough to have a sexual relationship until much older.

i know it sounds bad but i am just so lonely
 
What Is It

Youre the best thing thats ever happened to me
youre the worst thing on this earth
youre sometimes riddled with sadness
but usually riddled with mirth
everybody wants you
but they usually pretend
that they dont want or need you
but they find you in the end
youre the most desired thing on the planet
but something that pessimists hate
everybody needs you
youre power, you know, is great
you remind me of the night
the moon, the stars above
everyone knows your name
my friends know your name
i know your name
its love
 
the shadow men

the dark is like a creature
down below
down in the pit
fingering old bones
the terrible creatures
down in the pit
there they lay
there they sit
i go with my question
into the pit of snow
they give me my answer
they laugh as i go
i waste away
here i sit
they told me where we go when we're dead
down into the pit
 

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