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Leedslad

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Hi, I wrote this poem when i was at one of my lowest points in my life. It helped me think that there is a better place, we just need the strength to find it. I hope you agree!

UTOPIA

When you are feeling grey, and happiness
subsides
Youve got to find a special place, deep within your
mind
When all are against, and lonley is how you feel
Go to the special place, escape from the
real
Enter your garden of Eden, enter your utopia
In this place you are royalty and nobody can hurt you
The pleasures within this place, a world so devine
Look around inside yourself and start to feel fine
Its a place where you`re yourself
A place where you are free
You can forget about all others
Be who you want to be
When all around is confusion,Indecisions and illusions
Clear your mind free your soul
Let your emotions take control
Enter a warm safe place, hidden from strife
This is your reality check, this is your life
Enter your utopia be free real and pure
Enter your utopia be confident be sure[/b]
 
Leedslad said:
Hi, I wrote this poem when i was at one of my lowest points in my life. It helped me think that there is a better place, we just need the strength to find it. I hope you agree!

UTOPIA

When you are feeling grey, and happiness
subsides
Youve got to find a special place, deep within your
mind
When all are against, and lonley is how you feel
Go to the special place, escape from the
real
Enter your garden of Eden, enter your utopia
In this place you are royalty and nobody can hurt you
The pleasures within this place, a world so devine
Look around inside yourself and start to feel fine
Its a place where you`re yourself
A place where you are free
You can forget about all others
Be who you want to be
When all around is confusion,Indecisions and illusions
Clear your mind free your soul
Let your emotions take control
Enter a warm safe place, hidden from strife
This is your reality check, this is your life
Enter your utopia be free real and pure
Enter your utopia be confident be sure[/b]

Beautiful. Have you read Utopia by Sir Thomas More?
 
This is good and reminds me of something I've just started doing lately. It's giving me peace but I'm not sure it's healthy.
 
Jeffrey,

If what you are doing that makes you feel good is illegal or immoral, then it's probably the kind of thing that will come back and bite you in the ass. So, be careful!
 

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