The Wonderful Sin
Well-known member
Before you read, know that the book is half a complete work of fiction, half based on real issues and dealings with people here at this site. The prologue under this is one of those complete works of fiction.
If you would help me re-word a few things maybe, and help come up with a name for the character in the prologue. He will be a somewhat minor character throughout the book, so he needs a name and a username. It will not be stated that he is the same person anywhere in the book, but it will definitely be known. So if I could have that little bit of help.
Lastly, enjoy the prologue. I poured my heart into it, and it is rather depressing, but enjoy it anyway. Thank you.
-------------------------------------
And note that the formatting is correct on my Word document I have it from, it changed it when I posted it here, but it is correct, so that doesn't need fixing lol.
If you would help me re-word a few things maybe, and help come up with a name for the character in the prologue. He will be a somewhat minor character throughout the book, so he needs a name and a username. It will not be stated that he is the same person anywhere in the book, but it will definitely be known. So if I could have that little bit of help.
Lastly, enjoy the prologue. I poured my heart into it, and it is rather depressing, but enjoy it anyway. Thank you.
-------------------------------------
And note that the formatting is correct on my Word document I have it from, it changed it when I posted it here, but it is correct, so that doesn't need fixing lol.
The door slams shut as (Enter name here) walks to his computer. The power button lights up. Tears hit the keyboard as the computer loads. A loud sniffle when he tries to catch himself as the computer is finished loading. He drags his mouse up to the address bar and begins typing. A-L-O-N-E… The link he wants comes up. (name) drags the cursor to a link that reads, “www.alonelylife.com” and clicks it. A smile fills his melancholy face as the main page of the forums comes to view.
Shaking, he scrolls down to the ‘Miscellaneous’ section of the forums. As he clicks it, the Earth starts to weep. A warm tear trickles down his face as he clicks the ‘New Topic’ button. His fingers hit the keyboard at a lightning speed that seems to take years to stop.
“To Anyone Who Might Give a ****,”
He rises from the computer desk and moves to the door.
“Thank you for these many months of happiness. Thank you to those of you who have spoken with me. You have helped me out greatly. This site has helped me find out what is truly important in my life. You all helped me realize those things. Because of all of you, I have been able to smile and laugh once more.”
The lock turns.
“But, life off the internet has gotten far worse. I have lost everything that I found is important. Everything that has made me smile while away from here. My ex-wife has won full custody of the children, and refuses to let me see them. She has moved half way across the country to assure that I don’t see them. On top of that, I lost my job, my parents died, I never see my friends, and nobody ever seems to care.”
He slowly walks to his bedroom and sits on his bed.
“My time here was fun, but it wasn’t enough.”
A drawer on his bedside opens.
“Which is why I am saying goodbye to all of you, my friends, on this wonderful site.”
A gun finds its way into his hand. He presses it to his temple.
“I will not be returning. Not ever.”
A deep breath.
“By the time any of you read this, I will be long gone. I assure you, I tried. I tried for so long. I only made it this far thanks to you. If God does exist, I will tell him of this wonderful place and all of you wonderful souls who inhabit it. I will miss you and I am sorry. I hope all of you find your little slice of happiness. Never let it get away if you do. I will never forget all of the great laughs, tears, and discussions we shared.”
A tear drop hits the floor with an earth shattering boom.
“To all of you at A.L.L.”
Live and vision fade from his eyes from red to black in a very long instant.
“Thank you.”