Ancient Lovers

[Azariah]

It is a mystery
hidden in forgotten memories
Who we were, in the past,
Two lovers getting lost in the world
only to be reunited again
we loved this game so much
that we played it a thousand times over
Now, I pray, don't leave me
do not part with me and leave me lost once again
I long for but the touch of your hand
the sight of your smile
to get lost in those brilliant eyes
you are my lover
we we're always meant to be
how I long to tell you what my word's cannot
with my body, spirit, and soul
as I write these words down
I pray they reach your perfect eyes
across the ocean
to the center of your heart​

 

[TropicalStarfish]

Did you write that?

 

[TheSkaFish]

I feel like your writing has improved a lot lately. You're not just rhyming, you're really painting a picture here. There's a lot more imagery and feeling, storytelling and metaphor, and I feel like your ideas and technique are getting more complex. Keep it up.