Like you ever had a chance

[Ire]

Wrote this when I got drunk last Saturday.

One cannot defeat
Thus, the heart condemns the soul,
And so the soul is covered in tar.

Within oblivion we seek escape,
From the demons we have become.
The pre-dawn scene.

Covered in apathy,
We grin and bear the...
The zombie pill OD killed me.

It's a foregone conclusion.
Unto the inevitable course,
I usurp my soul.

Demons, eat me,
Consume my essence
Make me a part of you.

 

[SleepyKid]

wow, for being drunk that's
pretty well written out.
I can see this in a famous
poem book in the future >w>

 

[Bluey]

hah, I think drink can bring the moor creative side out in me sometimes. I know some actors get drunk be for they go out on stage cos they think it makes them act better.

Very good dude.

 

[itti]

never drinked !! i guess i should . maybe i be usefull for a change
and nice writing there mate . keep it going

 

[SleepyKid]

nyerr...-is afraid of being drunk-

 

[evanescencefan91]

ya that is great, got some real edgar allen poe in you

XD