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sallekhana

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Hi, my names Cody
and i'm an a------.

i'm not sorry because
i live a sorry life
but because i feel
as if i say 'sorry'
all the time.

"I Hate That You Drink."
3 inches from my own face
the love of my life would
say her very last words
to me.

3 hours, 42 minutes, and 3 seconds
later she would be gone.

"Sorry."
thats all i could say,
its all i ever can say
when nothing else
is to be said.

i know that she expected me
to say something like,
"ok, ill stop" but thats
something i could never give her.
I.
Will.
Never.
Stop This.

hi, my name is Abigail
and i'm a piece of s---.

last night was the first time
i had been held as i cried.
it had been 2 months,
10 minutes, and 49 seconds
sense i got the phone call.

out in the snow, on the
curb, in the dark.
my cut up jeans, her favorite
shirt,my jack purcells, my hoody,
and a bottle of cheap vodka.

she held me for all that i had lost,
she held me for all of my tears,
she held me for everything
and everyone that is
now nothing!
NOTHING!

hi, my name doesn't mean anything
and i'm not like the rest of them
in that room! no! i am not!

I.
Am.
Real.
 
gauloises said:
i'm not sorry because
i live a sorry life
but because i feel
as if i say 'sorry'
all the time.

Wow... I like this quotation!
 
Sallekhana,

This is an awesome work of poetry--it is so deep and emotional. It gave me chills because it sounds so much like the tragedy of my husband and I and how he passed away.

Is your poem based on an incident of true feelings...what inspired you to write this, may I ask? I would like to know more about it, if you wouldn't mind sharing it with me.

If you feel uncomfortable posting that information here, please PM me. I write poetry also. I have some threads out there now.

 

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