a poem

[swirlturtle]

We live in hell, in chaos, in apathy
We trive to compete and fail, and fall
We let go, let anger, take control
We seclude, we hide, we hate til we implode

We blame the wall, the ground, the very hands who made them
We long for the past of exactly the same sentiments
We long for the future that we never accept to exist
We wait in the present not moving, not loving, just dying

Look outside the window see the tress for what they are
See the clouds cover the sky
See the animals fight for life, die for life
Nature is gentle, nature is cruel

We hate with spite with very bitter taste in our tongue
With frail hands and feet and no real determination
We hate and kill only the beating of our hearts
We complain, we frustrate ourselves, but like a good dog we stay

We live in hell but we are no angels anyway
We lack the stregnth to fly
For hate is such a heavy baggage
And to fly we need to be light


( a ramble for all the negatives and negativities in the world)

 

[Azariah]

*Applause* Let it out man, let it out. eff the whirl. no serious, i write poems too, i like it. it's... raw.

 

[swirlturtle]

Haha thanks.. Actualy it was just a rant that i made into a poem so i couldlet itout and post it here. post your poems too!!!!

 

[ForGrantedWife]

I completely understand your feelings of anger and hopelessness but I really do hope you feel better soon! You're right when you say these feelings are heavy and drag you down Thanks for sharing, gotta get things off your chest and lighten the load.

 

[swirlturtle]

It is not actually what I am feeling more about a reaction to what people say... It seems like it has become a trend to hate everything and to be hopeless and negative. And i hope people who hate see what they are contributing to the world. But thanks for your words