iwasaloverb4thiswar
Well-known member
ok ok so i will admit thats not an oringinal title, stole it from a webcomic (as well as my avatar). check 'em out btw, good for a few laughs, AND he adds a new one everyday (BONUS!!)...
http://toothpastefordinner.com/
ok so this is the first time i have ever shown anyone my writing, there is loads of this stuff around my apartment. What do you think, be honest!
enough stalling, here we go...
1.
Voice low melodious
Flecked with foreign lilt
Flowing like sea water over sand
Already I think,
What warm color will I kiss?
And whether it will be the truth.
Before my eyes,
Beams of life and particles of energy,
A thousand beating hearts.
But yet my lips drip with no words.
I never knew how to say
What was forming in the womb.
2.
the earth is a moving mass of riotous decay,
filmed in lapsed time it would undulate.
Fungus and mold and mushroom
Maggots scuffle and writhe
Black and of undeterminable texture
The death of life
A life of death
If you stared long enough
Immersed yourself in it
Passively wallowed as mildew formed rings around
Eyes, nose and mouth
Breathed it in, tasted it- in your teeth, the back of your neck
Let beetle bugs crawl round every orifice
Clothing tenderized, hung damply and rotted off.
Only then might you know
The whole world.
The slack-jawed blue fingered fear,
The doll in the rags, in the ribcage, in the forest.
We are horrified by the joyful life surging through trees,
hidden, swollen and forgotten bodies.
Their hush, their peace, their indifference to our pleadings,
Their inability to grant us one merciful meeting of the eye.
3.
a poem!
A gift!
A burning dewy droplet of the heart and soul
Joy to me is golden amber orange,
Peaches, reds and pinks
Prickling across the skin in
Concentric circles.
Peace is of a different hue,
Of blues and blacks and stars
The pit of silent Ohm
Slipping backward,
Like a magnet.
The release of muscle, sinew, bone.
...and lastly, I was listening to one of my favorite rap artists (MF Doom), yeah I dabble in some hip hop from time to time, though its not usually my favorite genre...anyway thought I would try my hand at writing my own small rhyme since I admire free form poets so much, though this one was premeditated and contains some lines from other stuff I have written (you may notice). Hey, give a girl a break, its my first time, LOL! Enjoy!
Sounds soft, sonorous
Low tones melodious
Drum beat kicks
And I drift back
Pulse beats low on the radar
Don’t need attention to get this far
I’m moving through this town soft as a cotton sheet
No ones rolling over loosing sleep on account of me
Sleep, slip, skirt, and enunciate
I catch my breaks and start again don’t hesitate
No I don’t roll solo enough not to be your friend
I’m even fair enough to treat your flaws as a passing trend
Pits of silent ohm
And I’m slipping backward
Fast-forward, ripped, and there’s only laughter
Oh enlightened Buddha, I will be the one
The humid tongue
To lick the corners of your mind clean
Stop trying
To force the muses hand
Don’t try to make a stand, you’re just the pawn
The dead wood of the wizard’s wand
Sit back and watch the sparks fly
Sip the magic mixture and don’t ever try
The taste can be agreeable, don’t you think?
“Some more, sir, for me thanks and yes please”
Naw, son I don’t want your voodoo honeysuckle
I’m 100% natural and I’m proud of it
But I like it when you make your heels click, hon
Make your home mine
And spend your time with me some
There’s no destination on this roller coaster ride of insanity
But if we end the beginnings where its gonna be
I push to keep my boundary on the universal scale
It may not help me but I like it and ill keep it there
http://toothpastefordinner.com/
ok so this is the first time i have ever shown anyone my writing, there is loads of this stuff around my apartment. What do you think, be honest!
enough stalling, here we go...
1.
Voice low melodious
Flecked with foreign lilt
Flowing like sea water over sand
Already I think,
What warm color will I kiss?
And whether it will be the truth.
Before my eyes,
Beams of life and particles of energy,
A thousand beating hearts.
But yet my lips drip with no words.
I never knew how to say
What was forming in the womb.
2.
the earth is a moving mass of riotous decay,
filmed in lapsed time it would undulate.
Fungus and mold and mushroom
Maggots scuffle and writhe
Black and of undeterminable texture
The death of life
A life of death
If you stared long enough
Immersed yourself in it
Passively wallowed as mildew formed rings around
Eyes, nose and mouth
Breathed it in, tasted it- in your teeth, the back of your neck
Let beetle bugs crawl round every orifice
Clothing tenderized, hung damply and rotted off.
Only then might you know
The whole world.
The slack-jawed blue fingered fear,
The doll in the rags, in the ribcage, in the forest.
We are horrified by the joyful life surging through trees,
hidden, swollen and forgotten bodies.
Their hush, their peace, their indifference to our pleadings,
Their inability to grant us one merciful meeting of the eye.
3.
a poem!
A gift!
A burning dewy droplet of the heart and soul
Joy to me is golden amber orange,
Peaches, reds and pinks
Prickling across the skin in
Concentric circles.
Peace is of a different hue,
Of blues and blacks and stars
The pit of silent Ohm
Slipping backward,
Like a magnet.
The release of muscle, sinew, bone.
...and lastly, I was listening to one of my favorite rap artists (MF Doom), yeah I dabble in some hip hop from time to time, though its not usually my favorite genre...anyway thought I would try my hand at writing my own small rhyme since I admire free form poets so much, though this one was premeditated and contains some lines from other stuff I have written (you may notice). Hey, give a girl a break, its my first time, LOL! Enjoy!
Sounds soft, sonorous
Low tones melodious
Drum beat kicks
And I drift back
Pulse beats low on the radar
Don’t need attention to get this far
I’m moving through this town soft as a cotton sheet
No ones rolling over loosing sleep on account of me
Sleep, slip, skirt, and enunciate
I catch my breaks and start again don’t hesitate
No I don’t roll solo enough not to be your friend
I’m even fair enough to treat your flaws as a passing trend
Pits of silent ohm
And I’m slipping backward
Fast-forward, ripped, and there’s only laughter
Oh enlightened Buddha, I will be the one
The humid tongue
To lick the corners of your mind clean
Stop trying
To force the muses hand
Don’t try to make a stand, you’re just the pawn
The dead wood of the wizard’s wand
Sit back and watch the sparks fly
Sip the magic mixture and don’t ever try
The taste can be agreeable, don’t you think?
“Some more, sir, for me thanks and yes please”
Naw, son I don’t want your voodoo honeysuckle
I’m 100% natural and I’m proud of it
But I like it when you make your heels click, hon
Make your home mine
And spend your time with me some
There’s no destination on this roller coaster ride of insanity
But if we end the beginnings where its gonna be
I push to keep my boundary on the universal scale
It may not help me but I like it and ill keep it there