Schoolyard Battle

[Naval_Fluff]

The sun was playing peek-a-boo
Hidden with the clouds
The children laughed and waged their wars
Grinning as peace was vowed

But on the far side of this playground
A different story is told
On with anguish, glory and triumph
Where punishment is doled

High upon the monkey bars
Is where my foe was perched
Waiting silent for his next victim
An innocent soul to hurt

Youn and stupid I was back then
I wandered aimlessly by
He swung his foot into my chest
My day had gone awry

I swung my sword in form of tears
And wailed until I heard
The crunching steps upon the gravel
Of a mother to scold her heir

She took one look and assumed the worst
Wrought by her own son
As she dragged him away, deaf to his cries
I knew that I had won

 

[Steel]

I enjoyed that poem. Thankyou for sharing

 

[EveWasFramed]

Awesome!!!!!

 

[Naval_Fluff]

Thanks guys!

 

[cheaptrickfan]

I really like this.

 

[Naval_Fluff]

Glad to hear that Cheaptrickfan, I appreciate it

 

[PoWer2tHePeOpLE]

fun poem (need a g for 'young', 4th stanza bud)

 

[Naval_Fluff]

Oh my O.O thanks for pointing that out..I really hate grammer mistakes in my poems >,<
But now it won't let me edit it

 

[Jesse]

Haha nice dude. Good ending.

 

[Naval_Fluff]

Thanks man, I appreciate that. It's always good to hear positive feedback