My First Song

[Senjina]

I've been thinking of writing a song for a while and ive started already.. im stuck though. Its in memory of my grandpa. Let me know what you think

Lovin' Pa:

Walking out into the yard
Out and to the tobacco barn we use to walk
Enjoying our time outside
Living life by passing time
I didn't know that it would be so hard

You're in our Memories
Knowing its just hard to see.

Thats it so far.

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Here is an audio clip

Lovin' Pa

 

[Senjina]

I altered second line to:
Out into the tobacco barn wed always go

 

[Senjina]

Added more:

I changed a line or two and continued.

Walking out into the yard
Out and to the tobacco barn we'd always go
Enjoying our time outside
Living life by passing time
I didnt know that it would be so hard

You're in our memories
Knowing its just hard to see
The way things use to be
With you right next to me

The days we would just stay at home
Playing games or just (sit and) *maybe* watch tv
We'd talk about all the time
When you were here with me
And the family

More soon

 

[Senjina]

Ive found someone who will help me with the music for the song. ive added the chorus to the bottem and im trying to figure out where to continue. i also have a updated audio clip.

Lovin' Pa
Walking out into the yard
Out and to the tobacco barn we'd always go
Enjoying our time outside
Living life by passing time
I didn’t know that it would be so hard

You're in our memories
Knowing its just hard to see
The way things use to be
With you right next to me

The days we would just stay at home
Playing games or just watch TV
We'd talk about all the time
When you were here with me
And the family

You're in our memories
Knowing its just hard to see
The way things use to be
With you right next to me

 

[wolvesjr]

Liking it a lot so far. Can't wait to see where you take it.

 

[Senjina]

Forgot to say over 2 months ago that i finished the song :3 but i have no music to it