Progression 3: Question

This progression is different than the other two. This is the only poem I wrote that was for someone initially. This is a poem I wrote for a girl I like and I still do but she dosent like like me really but I'm ok with that because I feel lucky just being her friend. It does say her name in it though. There is a part that I say "blood is what I spit" because sometimes I get really frustraighted with anger and sad and just stuff like that and sometimes when someone is really making me mad I bite into my lip and it bleeds and I either spit or swallow the blood. It dosent hurt really but it's better than hurting them first because I am really strong but I don't use it to hurt on purpose. I use it mainly to protect the one that need it. I am not really good at making love poems i found out adter i wrote this. Ok well here it progression 3.


Progression 3
(Question)
Written by The Protector
On March 30, 2011

The first time I saw you I couldn't believe,
How cute was the girl that sat right next to me

I'm trying my best,
To tell you how I feel,
To have no more regrets,
Maria Maciel.

Every day,
With the way you look,
You take my breath away,
Into Your beautiful eyes, a peek I took.

I'm am very shy,
But writing this makes ease,
To tell you why,
Sitting next to you makes me pleased.

If you have a problem,
Don't be shy,
I'll help u solve em,
Because I'm a nice guy.

Now that I've realized,
How dumb was I,
Made me feel,
Like this year has passes me bye

My time for tears has ended,
Because I missed the sun,
Now I'm moving on to find better stars that would be more fun,
And right for you my rout has bended.

I'm now realizing just how kind and sweet you are,
When the other only gave me a scar,

You give me joy when we happily talk,
So please my rout don't you block,

Right to your heart,
Because byour in mine,
So the question I shall start,
With me would u dine?

If like that you don't like me,
Then no is ok,
But shall you say yes,
My heart will fill with glee.

Think about this as much as you desire,
You can even ask your friends,
But any answer you choose,
You will still be one to admire.

Blood was what I spit,
And you saw,
Then realization is what hit,
How caring your voice was made me look at you in aw.

That's when I knew,
That you cared for me,
And I cared for you.

Even if it's just some,
I still feel awesome,
Even if for telling you this has a negative outcome.

So to answer my question,
take any amount of time,
In terms of a girlfriend,
Would you be mine?

I like it

Protector,

Is this about a new girl that came into your life just recently?

That is what it sounds like you are so sweetly writing about.

Thanks Poguesy

This is not about the same girl the others wer about but a new girl so, yes
i still like this girl but im happy being just her friend. she is really awesome and she is really pretty too!