Lonely I am:

[Bluerose]

Lonely I am:

Lonely are the nights
Lonely are the days
Lonely I am, in so many ways

Lonely are the seasons
Lonely are the years
So lonely I am, that I go into tears.

Lonely is this place
Lonely is my life
Lonely I am, that I reach for a knife

Lonely I am in this dark room
Lonely is my sentence
So lonely I am that I ask for repentance.

 

[Sanal]

This is so nice

 

[Unacceptance]

The last group is missing the scheme that the previous ones had. I think it would be perfect if that was switched up a bit. At least maybe the first line of that last group trimmed a little syllable wise.

 

[Chris 2]

That is very good mate!

 

[SadRabbit]

Nice poem...Loneliness is like cancer, it slowly destroys you and weakens you.