my 1st poem by me

[Syber Tiger]

Sitting in my room
dark as the night
waiting for the moon,so shine its light
apone my lonliness

Sitting in my room
all alone,waiting...
for my life to change
just give me a chance

Sitting in my room
thining of you
if u can only know
How i feel about you
the pain will be gone

Sitting in my room
knife in my hand
wanting to slip
trough my body

Bleeding

just like my heart bleed for you...

by TIger

 

[Drama]

I like!

 

[Zak]

Thats ace

 

[floffyschneeman]

tiger, this is very sad. -.- But it's also awesome I like the vulnerability that goes with the feeling you are portraying. But still very sad -.- no knife in real life please. *hugs*

 

[Syber Tiger]

naw,no knifes irl

 

[johnfletcher]

beautiful

 

[hobit124]

I also wrote a poem when I was 16. I am sharing it here but have forgotten the last two last lines of the poem
I am alone, I am alone,
wandering here and there like an astray soul
Nobody cares my pleasure and joy,
thinking that I am only a boony toy
Ah! My eyes are sheeding tear,
Am I told who cares
Even then I want to live in this materialistic world,
which is mean, selfish and absurd
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