The F-Word

[Occipudding]

felt inspired by this messageboard. life, self-esteem, etc.. Probably the most blatant use of the f-word I've ever used in a poem.

My mode of transportation
Is a stuck messed rut vocation
I travel down the calix
And I can't help when I grind my teeth
But a lonely life would be so grand
If I wasn't so ******* lonely after all
fresia.
And ah-ah-uh-I-I
See no evil
In what they do
I can't take such subjective views
They're all just such fools
And so am I
fresia.
So whaddaya do, whaddaya do?
When New York is just a hole and Brooklyn's just a slum
Whaddaya do, whaddaya do?
When the honeysuckle that stuck to you has all but come unglued
And the drugs are for the kids in school
And you still don't get it
And you know you're not getting it
fresia.
Got a job the other day
I wish it'd all just go away
I need a break
I need to lose this bellyache
Let it go, let it go
10-87 this crux
Morphine these perils
I'm a lame duck
fresia.

 

[jales]

And ah-ah-uh-I-I
See no evil
In what they do
I can't take such subjective views
They're all just such fools
And so am I
fresia.


Kool poem.. i a lot of people i've met here feel this way

 

[Bluey]

WOW! That is a cool poem, I liked it. I liked it a lot.

 

[Occipudding]

thank you both. not my best work but not bad. thanks for reading and thanks for commenting. glad you both liked it.

 

[evanescencefan91]

ya thats a good poem,

I think you should make into a song, it would be really cool