Want

[dreA]

this is my first post here.
i'm so lonely, its finally coming out.......I wrote a poem about how i've been feeling lately.

WANT
Lonely wrapped itself around me. A glacial embrace,that caressed by body until it ached. Numbing my nape, with an icy ardor. Brushing my lips, seductive and cruel. Whispering, in my ear remindful of what is lacking. Promising nothing. Lonely, travels through me, leaving a cold shiver of, want.

 

[totallyexhausted]

*hugs dreA*

 

[Guest]

Your poem is really beautiful andd it describes exactly how i am feeling and the wanting.

 

[Sinlaw]

I really liked the poem,i guess i can understand how you feel

 

[dreA]

thanks all!!
its sad, that so many people are so lonely, in a world full of people.
chin up, and be strong!!

 

[angeLLblueshadow]

yeah, now that you said it dreA it's really sad people are so lonely even being around each other, your poem was beautiful and really inspiring, i loved it, keep it up, you should write more!