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TheWrathof_Jay

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this is a work in progress im not sure which way i am going to go with it, poem, song, whatever.
so any comments would be much appreciated, any slander also accomodated
p.s it has an odd rythmn

pressed down, held down
paralysed~, cant frown
people playing, with me
people praying, for me

no escape that i can see
no reversion back to me
caught inside this shell, this body
i want to scream, to tell somebody

im not alone im isolated
these priests around me feel elated
i have no motion, but feel emotion
surrounding me, like somethings coming.

i have no past cos its vast and confusing
it comes and goes, now it flows,
courses through me, it abuses me
this knowledge this power i let it devour

now i see whats in front of me
its crazy and spinning, but ill let it be
the beauty of madness obsesses me
we all are a part of diversity

Have you seen an angel fall?
we don't slouch, we stand tall
darkness hides where shadows fall
and i am the shadow who hunts them all

you cannot stop me so let it be
for i am here for eternity
im watching your back the devils fighter
you'd kill and slaughter a mother or daughter

i promise you now a place i hell
you will love it i can just tell
so fall in battle and you will make it
your soul i will carry to the devil i take it.
 

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