I have got a new idea!

[Adryan]

Hi! I'm a 20 years old guy and well, I want to improve my English, and I love rap music, in fact I write rap music in Spanish (now in English too) and... I have thought make rap songs in English and upload to mmm maybe youtube... and share it with you all!

this gives me a lot of shame but this is the only way I have for talk better in English, maybe my pronunciation or my lyrics aren't very good but if you can help me to improve I would be so much grateful.

Greetings!

 

[Adryan]

Well, this is my first english song, you could help me to improve the song if you want... so much thanks!
I think all is fine but I don't know jaja.

"I walk to a dark tunnel, without to can change the channel
I don't like this but I love to travel

everyday I ask myself if go there is a good idea
I want to risks, don't want go to the museum.

baby only hears, I have commited a lot of mistakes
but I know how controlled the quake

when I feel a beat with so much noise, it's awesome
just wait while I work, ******* *******

baby I've got a new life over there
I hope... all will be good, with the hate in the air

... you all doing everything for scare
because having own thinking is like go to the death chair

sometimes I feel like a bird, without wings but with balls
while, I'm writing sit on the table

this beat hit me hard, in the head, makes me like an animal
not to understand my lyrics is terrible

let it go, was alright but now incredible
don't try to do it like me, nobody is capable

right now pain is gone, but the bomb is here
pick me up, and rehear me

now coming home.. while I'm singing in my mind
I guess all I want... is to find my way,

at the night... nothing is too important because
if you lose a opportunity will open another door"