lonewolf
Well-known member
Folks, Id greatly appreciate your thoughts on this.
I do sometimes have somewhat very depressive moments, but i never really let it all out. And there are moments where i think of the greatest poems and then theyre gone in an instant. Here what ive done ive tried to write down my emotions whilst i was down and make it into a poem.
.Yet to be titled.
Of all the people that i see
only one had really looked at me
his eyes bore down into my soul
unlocked the secrets that i hold
a frown creases acoss his face
and in his eyes i see
a wanten look of pure disgrace
we struggle for a word
blank looks through half an eye
and out of nowhere i thought i heard
a faint whisper asking why?
a tear rolls down his face
he starts to tremble
hes stuck in this place
he screws up his eyes
his expression twists
what is he hiding
what have i missed?
tears fall to the floor
i try to comfort him
but i want to do more
im hurting he says
what the hell can i do
its been like this for days
and now im trapped here with you
heavy lines imposed on his brow
he grabs me and crys
of all the years its even worse now
now im alone
how will i cope
being hollow to the bone
no future no hope
no lover no friends
theres just you
you to the end
i try and assure him it'll all be fine
things do get better
just give them time
i tear rolls down my cheek
hes getting to me now
ive gotta leave im feeling weak
wiping a tear off my face
i open the door and into the hall
leaving him trapped in his place
in the mirror on the wall
The poem basically describes a bit of what i went through when i split with my girlfriend, and no matter how bad your troubles get.. talk about them, to a friend a family member, place of worship, online friend or even here. Just don't suffer in silence it only makes things worse. I still to this day pretend like nothings wrong when im around my family they have no idea whats going on in my life, im just worried they'll see me as being weak, and id rather not have the whole family talking about me. Is this a wise decision,, probably not, but its the one ive made....for now.
I do sometimes have somewhat very depressive moments, but i never really let it all out. And there are moments where i think of the greatest poems and then theyre gone in an instant. Here what ive done ive tried to write down my emotions whilst i was down and make it into a poem.
.Yet to be titled.
Of all the people that i see
only one had really looked at me
his eyes bore down into my soul
unlocked the secrets that i hold
a frown creases acoss his face
and in his eyes i see
a wanten look of pure disgrace
we struggle for a word
blank looks through half an eye
and out of nowhere i thought i heard
a faint whisper asking why?
a tear rolls down his face
he starts to tremble
hes stuck in this place
he screws up his eyes
his expression twists
what is he hiding
what have i missed?
tears fall to the floor
i try to comfort him
but i want to do more
im hurting he says
what the hell can i do
its been like this for days
and now im trapped here with you
heavy lines imposed on his brow
he grabs me and crys
of all the years its even worse now
now im alone
how will i cope
being hollow to the bone
no future no hope
no lover no friends
theres just you
you to the end
i try and assure him it'll all be fine
things do get better
just give them time
i tear rolls down my cheek
hes getting to me now
ive gotta leave im feeling weak
wiping a tear off my face
i open the door and into the hall
leaving him trapped in his place
in the mirror on the wall
The poem basically describes a bit of what i went through when i split with my girlfriend, and no matter how bad your troubles get.. talk about them, to a friend a family member, place of worship, online friend or even here. Just don't suffer in silence it only makes things worse. I still to this day pretend like nothings wrong when im around my family they have no idea whats going on in my life, im just worried they'll see me as being weak, and id rather not have the whole family talking about me. Is this a wise decision,, probably not, but its the one ive made....for now.