Jesse
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I stand motionless at the end of a long hallway.
Intermittent little lights on the ceiling valiantly
attempt to fight off the darkness.
The constant thumping sound breaks me from my trance
and I begin to walk down the shadowy path.
The thumping becomes louder as I make my way. This
is the day. I walk ever closer to the door at the
end. That door with the light brimming all around it;
it's so inviting.
Wow. Before I realized it, I've reached the door. My
hand grasps the cold metal handle. I take a deep breath
as I enter the room. A pulsating wave of techno-music
nearly forces me back a step, but I move on. Through the
crowds and flashing, flickering, multi-colored lights,
I move on. Nobody notices my movement.
Now here am I. I'm in the center of the rave. Something
isn't right. Oh yes, the pill. I should have taken it a
half hour ago. No matter. I reach in my pocket and find
it though I notice before I can take it that the eyes
of everyone around me are focused on my soul. What's
wrong with their eyes?
...Their eyes...They're completely white...all of them..
I notice a brief half-smile on the pale, sweating faces
of the people who have now formed a circle around me.
Before I can blink...they all bare their pointed teeth
with a hiss. The lights go out and the music stops just
before I can.....scream.
-Jesse
Intermittent little lights on the ceiling valiantly
attempt to fight off the darkness.
The constant thumping sound breaks me from my trance
and I begin to walk down the shadowy path.
The thumping becomes louder as I make my way. This
is the day. I walk ever closer to the door at the
end. That door with the light brimming all around it;
it's so inviting.
Wow. Before I realized it, I've reached the door. My
hand grasps the cold metal handle. I take a deep breath
as I enter the room. A pulsating wave of techno-music
nearly forces me back a step, but I move on. Through the
crowds and flashing, flickering, multi-colored lights,
I move on. Nobody notices my movement.
Now here am I. I'm in the center of the rave. Something
isn't right. Oh yes, the pill. I should have taken it a
half hour ago. No matter. I reach in my pocket and find
it though I notice before I can take it that the eyes
of everyone around me are focused on my soul. What's
wrong with their eyes?
...Their eyes...They're completely white...all of them..
I notice a brief half-smile on the pale, sweating faces
of the people who have now formed a circle around me.
Before I can blink...they all bare their pointed teeth
with a hiss. The lights go out and the music stops just
before I can.....scream.
-Jesse
but perhaps I'll continue this story sometime.
