Poetry

[lonelyloner]

Your most affluent feature is your beautiful character,But I've never seen it.
I have thought of this day and I have also dreamed of it.Shall you share that grace today.Shall I see this beautiful face i have longed for.As i stare into your seemingly everlasting gaze I realize you will never share such beauty.I shall wait no more for this grace.I shant

 

[evanescencefan91]

ahh that's so pretty and it flowed together quite well it made me smilie

you have quite a talent

 

[NOAH_FX]

I like that, can i post some too? PLS! Pretty pls? Like.. With Cherries n honeysuckle?

 

[lonelyloner]

yes. i actually want to hear other's poetry

 

[NOAH_FX]

ok, but only because you twisted my arm.

Rewind back to the time
We sat outside and watched the sunset
Cold perspiring bottle in my hand
Cigarette smoke in my lungs

A fragmented moment in time
To you it meant nothing
To me everything

A memory of a time
That is all but forgotten
A memory so distorted it is no longer whole
But a set of imaginary moments
Based on an idea that has never held truth

Cold shower
Warm coffee
Another cigarette to calm my mind
Another sip of coffee to clear my throat

I cannot deduce what I can’t rationalize
I can’t bring myself to stir the flames
To create a fire that is all consuming

This is all that’s left
A memory of a moment that is both factual and fictional
A time and place I can never return

 

[lonelyloner]

wow..nice!

 

[Oscillate_Wildly]

I half wrote a poem once, inspired by the punk poet John Cooper Clarke. I don't know if I should post it or not. It could be quite embarrassing for me.

 

[lonelyloner]

why not?

 

[jivan]

Everyone loves and feels......

lovely poems.....

 

[NOAH_FX]

Heres another, not sure if anyone's interested. But I'd really love some feedback, i can take criticism

I struggle to regain consciousness,
As I attempt to silence the alarm,
The night has not been kind it seems,
Once more I bear the scars

I squint against the sunlight,
My head feels like a drum,
Depression’s grip is a strangle hold,
can’t rationalize this world

I drag myself out of my self-pity,
As I begin my daily deception for those who care,
I drive to work and say hello
And pretend I’m actually their

I struggle with my emotions
I want to snap at every word
I calm my mind and calm my words
And try to forget my crashing world

I have trouble remembering memories
Their distorted and decayed
What seems was once a fun distraction
Now seems manic, and irate

I cannot control my thoughts
Not sure if I would do it if I could
I may seem unbalanced and crazy
But so do you in my world

 

[Nina]

I loved all the poems. I have always had a love for the way people put words together. I can actually get lost in poetry. Beautiful job to ALL!