I really quite liked it, the actress gives off a sort of melancholy feel because you can tell from even the start that she has psychological problems. The only criticism I would give is that her alter-ego's each went on for a little too long. Apart from that, I think the actress was great, the music went well with the mood of the short and it was well edited.
Keep up the good work man!
P.S. I was the youtuber Xnanga, I left a comment and liked the video