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Renkei

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Shallow by Renkei.

it was all an lie
i told you id die
without you here in my arms
i wish you never lied
now i cant look in your eyes
i do nothing but cry
i always wonder why
i feel like i want to die
this shallow body is mine
to keep me cold
to bad you wont be here while i choke

all the quiet nights looking into your eyes
all that wasted time all for lies

I'm amazed what you find when you open your eyes.

now your gone and your hearts no longer mine
a wonder to me if your ever felt for mine
heartless and broken i can hardly breathe
my angel isn't here is hold and comfort me

the broken promises a memory lost
you gave everything up just for your lust

your cause not just a minute in time
no longer will i be able to look into your eyes

i was there just yesterday you held me tight
now you kiss him gently i open my eyes

you where Insecure you left me behind
this love wasn't real it was all an lie.
 
Renkei said:
Shallow by Renkei.

it was all an lie
i told you id die
without you here in my arms
i wish you never lied
now i cant look in your eyes
i do nothing but cry
i always wonder why
i feel like i want to die
this shallow body is mine
to keep me cold
to bad you wont be here while i choke

all the quiet nights looking into your eyes
all that wasted time all for lies

I'm amazed what you find when you open your eyes.

now your gone and your hearts no longer mine
a wonder to me if your ever felt for mine
heartless and broken i can hardly breathe
my angel isn't here is hold and comfort me

the broken promises a memory lost
you gave everything up just for your lust

your cause not just a minute in time
no longer will i be able to look into your eyes

i was there just yesterday you held me tight
now you kiss him gently i open my eyes

you where Insecure you left me behind
this love wasn't real it was all an lie.

Excellent! :)
 
I like it. It shows emotion and probably how you feel at this time. Feel better soon.
 
Nice! this reminds me of a video I made almost emoting from the source pain , love + emptiness.. I'll like to post this video here soon. Enjoyed your poem. thanks for sharing
 

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