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Asterli

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This is a poem I wrote after I saw an image of a woman. Her picture gave me the inspiration to write this.

She
By Asterli

In her room she is all alone,
The only place where she feels safe,
The spot on earth where she is on her own,
Outside the situation looks grave,

She falls on her bed, silently she’s crying,
She thinks is it all in her head or is the whole world lying,

She can’t explain why she feels this way,
Why she’s lonely and why she feels hurt,
Never a clear sky, it’s always the same day,
When she cries out, she is never heard,

Something she misses, someone who can make her whole,
Receiving sweet kisses but where does she find this beautiful soul?
Her beauty is hidden, would she be found, she could only guess,
But her garden is forbidden, for no one to access.
 
Nina said:
Beautiful words...

Only I could screw up a two word reply....:club:

I mean't to say--- the words are very sad but you did a beautiful job of conveying a strong feeling. It felt very sincere. I love words and the way people put them together...
 

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