Poem About Me

[HelenaMay]

I am young, I am lonely
You think I am free?
You think I am sultry
As thats what you see.

I go with a frown,
And my shoulders are down,
As they carry the world,
And it's weight lies with me.

Only thirteen,
I should be so keen,
To go and make friends,
I shouldn't refrain.

I will not go,
Won't let the pain show.
Don't want to be attacked
Punched again and again.

It's not for attention,
Away with relention,
This is true,
I am alone.

Don't lock me away,
Because that's what you say,
You will try to do,
If I carry on this road.

Get me some aid,
Don't be afraid,
Help me now
Save a life.

 

[Bluey]

Hi there That was a cool poem we seem to be having a lot of poets to day

I well move this to the express your self forum as well. You well be able to post in there now as well

Welcome here

 

[HelenaMay]

Please give ur comments on this poem. Thank you.
Helena XxX

 

[Chris 2]

Please give ur comments on this poem. Thank you.
Helena XxX

I think it an awesome poem, more than anything I could come up that for sure. I love how you use big word, like retention and stuff, was really cool. I give you an A for your poem, and another A for effort. I really like the poem, you sound like a sweet person. Hope you continue to post on this site.


Chris