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That's an excellent poem! I really think you should start writing poetry again! Hopefully the friend who this is dedicated to is watching over and wishing you the best.
 
Amazing....very thoughtful and expressive, I felt it, I lost a friend too. your poem spoke to me...thankyou.
 
They pass
Thought, effect, hate, love, and ambition
fade away, into the depths of time
unless preserved by some unerring pen
and the unconcious effort of the masses
whose eyes soak in the lives of others
preserving them

I really liked this part of your poem.... very true, how we all just sort've fade away from existence when others' memories of us cease to exist.
 

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